Words Apart in Fantoccini
2nd May 2017, 12:00 AM
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Words Apart

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Average Rating: 5
Number of people who have voted: 4
Author Notes:
2nd May 2017, 12:00 AM

Ever say something you desperately wish you could take back? Leopold sure does.

2nd May 2017, 2:48 AM

Man, you've had some serious art progression since '14... I recommend updating this work's avatar on the CF main page, it really undersells how beautiful this is.

3rd May 2017, 11:26 AM

Seconding this. The art is incredible, especially these flashback sections.

3rd May 2017, 4:32 PM

Thank you for the kind words!

3rd May 2017, 4:30 PM

That is excellent advice. I'll put that on my to-do list, thank you.

2nd May 2017, 3:41 PM

I suppose I shouldn't have assumed that Chroma died young. That she lived a long life gave Leopold that much longer to become attached, which makes this all the more brutal.

3rd May 2017, 4:43 PM

I could have had her dying young, but I think it's much more heartbreaking for somebody like Leo to watch somebody he has dedicated years of his life to mentoring and protecting slowly age and slip away. And you know how I love to torment Leo.

7th May 2017, 6:10 PM

I just started to read and its alrighty great

8th May 2017, 8:21 PM

Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

10th May 2017, 9:36 PM

Oh crap. Poor Leo.

And yes, there are things I would do almost anything to take back...

17th Jun 2017, 11:10 AM

So Leopold's an ageist. One more reason not to like the guy. And he'll turn on you on a dime.

Ok. From your comments, melaredblu, it seems I should give the guy another chance. OK.

18th Jun 2017, 11:57 PM

Leo has...issues. He's a guy who has very serious emotional baggage and doesn't know how to handle it. Whether that makes him sympathetic or aggravating seems to depend on the reader.

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